A neat premise, but the actual text feels more like a drunken rambling than a genuinely impactful text. I did like the question about the animals though - it felt like I encountered a bug at first, and it was quite unsettling. If it is, in fact, a gateway to the secondary, chilling layer of the game, I have missed it completely.
Thank you for your feedback! Its a premise I really want to work on refining and planning out more as well as improve on the writing style to keep it both more consistent and more impactful. Im really pleased you liked the animal/bug message because I was hoping that would come off as unsettling! Sadly I never got much of a chance to create more of a second layer but when I come back to this again I am going to look into how I can make more of these moments on a bigger and better scale ^_^
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FUCKING FANTASTIC GAME and GREAT writing
A neat premise, but the actual text feels more like a drunken rambling than a genuinely impactful text. I did like the question about the animals though - it felt like I encountered a bug at first, and it was quite unsettling. If it is, in fact, a gateway to the secondary, chilling layer of the game, I have missed it completely.
Thank you for your feedback! Its a premise I really want to work on refining and planning out more as well as improve on the writing style to keep it both more consistent and more impactful. Im really pleased you liked the animal/bug message because I was hoping that would come off as unsettling! Sadly I never got much of a chance to create more of a second layer but when I come back to this again I am going to look into how I can make more of these moments on a bigger and better scale ^_^